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השתדלתי להצמד עד כמה שניתו לניסוח בעברית, על אף שלפי דעתי גם הגירסה בעברית צריך תיקוני ניסוח ע"מ שיעשה רושם מקצועי יותר...
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נ.ב. אני חושב שעדיין יש צורך שזה יעבור הגהה ע"י מקצוען דובר אנגלית כשפת אם (ולא רק ברמת שפת אם...)
Filtered internet is not entirely safe.
Yes! Even filtered Internet involves risks.
The broader the filtered Internet is, the greater is the risk.
Present risks are:
Addictive Sites - There are many web sites which cause addiction to their surfers. This may cause them to check for updates on those sites as constant as every ten minutes or even less! this may seem humorous to those who are not familiar with it, but this is unfortunately the reality!
Typically, sites that cause addiction to their users are those which are updated at a very frequent pace, such as Blogs, forums, news or large content web sites.
This addiction oftenly causes extraordinary odd behavior by the affected person. The web addict can abandon quality time with his family in favor of some shallow content in these various forums.
